Thursday, November 19, 2009

poised



in the mist
of a distant morning
nothing in focus
i see myself

waiting to be ready
for change

2 comments:

  1. This time of year the mist lays heavy on the tree tops, sinking slowly within the branches depths, the lone structure stands witness to the event.

    Your poetic lines are beautiful and I fell the first four lines could be considered complete without the remaining two. Never the less, it is only an artistic difference and I do cherish all six lines of it.

    Thank you for sharing,
    Egmont

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  2. And I would say, that we are never ready for change. Change happens in spite of us... I see you in that mist. Trust ;-)

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